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Larisa Rimerman's avatar

So beautifully expressed the tragic theme of the poem. I love: "The sky is full with empty promise of heaven." Remarkable note about two people, "Only one had thought /We are friends."

The last four lines of the last stanza logically repeat the theme of the poem and the image of the chipped teacup, broken compact, reflecting a rye smile is devastating, for me.

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Mahdi Meshkatee's avatar

Arthur, this is heartbreakingly poignant, and so dear to my heart. Sometimes I think how by thinking about the marginalized we are marginalizing a whole lot, and I can never quite catch myself running where margins no longer matter. If that makes sense!

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Mahdi

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